Shadow Knight

Pff, no more updates since I last read it, HURRY UP HUNTER! *starts chant* WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE!

lol, Somehow I knew that was Sadie's father. I didn't know it the first time I read this fo you, because I hadn't read FREAK then, well, any of FREAK.

I think this is poetry, but wow, another sad poem, *cough cough* I wonder why you wrote this? Anyway, it's great, he he, I like it.

I've heard of people staying over night in hospitals because of concussions, though I'd say it's rare.

Well I loved it.... Though she didn't react much to Caleb. And you are really similar to your sister Griffin...

Nice. Hmm, even though I'm not one who see('?)s mistakes much, I didn't see any in this. Overall I like the poem.

I've gone over 800 pics and haven't been able to find a decent Shadow Knight pic to make my Avvie or DP! SOMEONE HELP!

The slang makes it hard to understand....

Do I need to start another chant? ok fair enough, WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE!

*dies with envy* ENVY ENVY ENVY!

I read it, still nothing that needs fixing, apart from the black hair thing.

*chants* WE WANT MORE, WE WANT MORE, WE WANT MORE!

I loved this Qi, absolutely loved it. We all know those muppets are dangerous. Elmo's gotta be the most dangerous, if you have flash, i can show you the security ...

Ok, you have made some typo's here and there. It's an interesting story, it needs a bit of editing, but like i told you before, i'm not much of an ...

lol, ok, i need to work on descriptions, and grammar, grammar is not a problem to fix.